Foreplay

(Flash Fiction Friday, 100 words on a set picture)

She felt nothing.

She thought about the next day, she would do the food shopping as early as possible but she mustn’t forget aubergine for the Sunday lunch ratatouille.

She heard him grunting and thought she should make the effort and responded in kind.

She wished she could tell him that all these accoutrements do nothing for her. But he was so delicate; she did not want to dent his confidence.

If only he would speak to her, use voice to tether her to him. She imagined the words …

Finally, mental foreplay complete she joined him in his enthusiasm

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8 Responses to Foreplay

  1. Michael says:

    Wonderful, Poppy, you convey so much and make us think with so few words. Good job.

  2. Diable Incarne says:

    Interesting psychology behind this one… but yes, most women do need their minds caressed before, during, an session intense.

    Happy Friday.

  3. Not My Original Vows says:

    I liked your take on this. Our minds can wonder at the most interesting moments. Great story, Poppy.

    Katia

  4. Poppy says:

    Thank you very much.

    I am a bit ditzy. I got Chrossed! Is there a banner or something? It was for my Disobedience thing- I knew disobedience was a good thing. Remind me to tell Himself that.

    Anyway, I just think that chains and leather are all very well but give me a few well chosen words over that anyday.

    Did I mention I got Chrossed?

    Poppy
    (who is somewhat excited in case that was not clear to you)

  5. devlinoneill says:

    You wrote well and creatively about disobedience and congratulations on being Chrossed, but never get the idea that disobedience itself is good, or good for you, or good for your bottom. That simply isn't on, little girl.

    (I told you he would notice you rather sooner than later. Smile )

  6. Poppy says:

    Thank you for the first bit.

    But some disobedience is terribly good for me and well worth the risk.

    Smile

  7. Angelika Devlyn says:

    Oh I do like your take on this, Poppy! How sweet she is.

    Smile

  8. Poppy says:

    Thank you Angelika.

    I thought she was sweet too. I thought it was time a very good girl popped her head up in these parts.

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