Flash Fiction – Obedience




Thank you Spanky for being very, very kind and allowing me to suggest a picture for this week’s Flash Fiction.

“Take your knickers off,” he said

Despite her horror at the request he knew she would obey

She couldn’t look at him as she complied.

Her eyes remained lowered as he told her to touch herself. He spoke in a deep voice of what she was to him, he detailed in words taken from her secret dreams what he was about to do to her.

When he told her to come she did so, a reaction that made her arch her back and call out to him. In her mind the words, “He can see me” echoed as she writhed.

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6 Responses to Flash Fiction – Obedience

  1. Luna Mauvaise says:

    Lovely photo choice, Poppy! And a wonderful contribution as well. Thanks for this week's inspiration. Smile

    xoxo
    ~Luna

  2. angelikadevlyn says:

    Well, fancy meeting you here! LOL I found the Flash Fiction Friday post, decided to enter, and then spotted someone called Poppy!

    I can see we were thinking along the same lines…and I don't just mean knickers. Here's mine.

  3. Paul says:

    Poppy, nice pic, good story. I hope that someone loves you, because you are worth it.
    Warm hugs,
    Paul.

  4. Poppy says:

    Thank you – I did enjoy writing this one, well it almost wrote itself.

    I commented on yours Angelika.
    Paul, I am very happy to tell you that I am loved very much. Blushes.

    Smile

  5. devlinoneill says:

    Well written bit, Poppy, and you chose a pretty picture too.

    Hi, Angelika!

  6. angelikadevlyn says:

    Hi, Dev! Smile

    Just came in to ask if it was alright to add Poppy's site to my blogroll…and found this!

    It's an old post, so I'd better get my act together and go to the most recent and ask. Smile

    Ooh, er!

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