Thanks to Spanky at Daily Toast for organising this. He supplies a picture and we who choose to write a 100 word fiction on it.
He told her she would experience a plug and she swallowed; a silent, penitent action from her heart.
She wanted to ask him to change his mind but she knew it was pointless. He was unrelenting and stern and she adored and feared him for those qualities.
When, however, he laid the chain on her back, and showed her how it was attached to a small bit of round black plastic it took a moment to understand.
He laughed and fitted the plastic in the bath drain- “A plug!” he chortled.
She smiled, tight lipped and was gone by morning.
(Below is a picture of the above lady once she had moved into her new house and away from that silly man. She has recovered her confidence as you can see but I feel she in need of a guiding hand. I sense a certain air of rebellion about her which as a fellow girl (not brat) I think is a wonderful thing but I am aware of how some people think that sort of thing should be dealt with. I suspect this lady will find a suitable lover very soon. i just thought you might like to know how it all turned out. )
I love being on that edge of terror only to crash down due to something silly. Way to capture it in so few words.
Totally justified Poppy!! That kind of mental foreplay isn't funny. We may submit – but we aren't toys – the mental preparation for that isn't laughable. So I appreciate your second picture and would love for you to write about her new lover….
Poppy, yes a cruel joke, she looks happy in the second picture, I hope that you will write about her.
Warm Hugs,
Paul.
Poppy- liked the happily ever after ending.
Katia
Thank you. I think I am finding my way around these fictions by realising I can save these girls with an ending all of my own.
Oh! Is that what writing is? I never thought about totally making stuff up before. I know that sounds sarcastic but honestly I didn't. I can have her do anything, can't I?
Katia- you are right. She does have a happy ending- not for her being treated like a toy. (Quite right FKL)
Excellent, Poppy, I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you Michael! It was silly but fun.
That was fun! Didn't see that one coming. Good job again!
Nice one, Poppy! I like how you continued it with the aftermath too.
xoxo
~Luna
Writing in third person AND making stuff up! I'm so proud.