Flash Fiction Friday – 100 words based on the above piccie.
First – by Devlin O’Neill, this is how it should be written.
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Now, er… my version.
I think I should say that really this picture was almost everything I find not sexy in a man, arrogance not dominance and the look of an effete poster boy. Shudder.
And I wrote this right off, one take, about thirty seconds. I took that as a sign that I should save the story and go onto something else.
I think it may be a sign that I am “stubborn and wilful” – a quote from someone, about me but not about Flash Fiction Friday. I am wondering of someone may have a point. You see, I think I may be having a reaction to having to base some scribbles on a specific picture each week.
Don’t say I did not warn you.
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It was all too easy.
Step one- find the cockiest man you can, the top that thinks he is a Top, probably a bit pin-up looking so he covers up lack of skill with tan muscles and a white toothed grin.
Step Two- find him at the place most likely to cause embarrassment, manly setting in front of colleagues is perfect.
Step Three- place large amount of quick-fix super glue on railing where he will lean in “diet coke break” style pose.
Step Four- wait with camera for moment after he makes joke and tries to step away from railing.
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Normal service will resume tomorrow.
Ooh, you're *bad*. LOL This is great!
Personally Poppy, your version appeals to me more, as it seems, your will get the longer, harder spanking!
Devlins version had me laughing though! Damn those professional writers!
Ah yes and having done my first attempt today…I know how difficult it can be! (took me all of 15 minutes dammit!)
I liked them both but obviously very different pieces.
Very good Devlin, funny with some delicious spanking thrown in.
Poppy, you got an evil chuckle at me once I got to the super glue line.
Thanks to both.
Mina
Wow! so its my laptop thats buggered then!
Loved Professors verion, sounds about right…cause the problem then spank her for it.
Poppy, your one made me laugh. When i saw the pick i couldnt help but think of the diet coke man.
lol.
hugs, Jay
You are hilarious!!! And yeah I agree the guys who really have it going on don't make a show of it. Alpha guys don't build their own stages – they live a philosophy, they aren't actors.
I loved your FFF. I'm always complaining about thongs roaring out of jeans fighting for attention. You captured this in a perfect setting where it was unprofessional and could be dealt with by someone capable.
Thank you for the compliments and I am sure that Dev will be pleased to read that you liked his (far better) piece.
It is Friday. I am going to drink now.
Thanks, Mina and Kay!
Jay, how did Burt cause the problem? Lana wore the inappropriate jeans. Or did you mean *I* caused the problem by writing it that way? I just call 'em as I see 'em.
Sara, I noted your flash fiction effort on the Devlin O'Neill blite, and I'll put the link here too – http://sarasspankingplace.blogspot.com/
You guys should have a look, even if Sara is very naughty and used a swear word twice in her comment. You may live to regret that, young lady.
Poppy, good job as always. Hope next week's pic is more to you liking.
your liking.
Good twofor! I liked the both!
Thank you Spanky!
Psssssst Sara, "damn" is so not a swear word. It damn well isn't! You see, you can use it without fear of reprisal here.
Poppy and Dev, excellent stories, both!!!
Warm hugs,
Paul.
This is so funny – I love it!! Meow
Poppy, it most certainly is a swear word, and the fact I allow you to use it once in a while does not indicate otherwise.
Oh uh, thank you, Spanky, Paul, and Meow. Very kind of you to say.